Love is a transaction

Love is just a transaction,

that we're all physically connected.

We present the correct set of pleasing qualities, 

and BOOM!!

We can turn it on,

We can turn it off,

When love goes on and on,

it can't just turn off, 

which is pain, pain is when having discomfort.

Discomfort means its off, but love can stay on.

Pain can hurt, but it can also cause good and bad conflicts. . .. around us.

At first I thought love was just a transaction,

with pride and prejudice,

but when I met "Someone" I believed in love,

that is was not a transaction,

and that we have to stick to the pain all the way through.

This poem is about: 
My community
My country
Our world

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