Love Me or Hate Me

Mon, 04/22/2013 - 09:56 -- TGrillz

love me or hate me, I don’t care.

When everyone left me hope was the only thing I had to spare.

I always hear people sayin “life ain’t fair.”
But that’s a blasphemous nightmare.

People are always wanting to compare.
Me to you, me to the world, me to thin air. 

And when you smile and I just stare.

I have the tools but, can’t repair
What was broken is beyond fixing...
And that’s all I have to share.

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

you have more to share
this piece reflects on how people treated you
learn from it and grow wise
keep writing-great job
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