On Love


United States
42° 24' 25.1604" N, 88° 3' 38.7252" W

My heart pulls at me heavily
Down, down, down
And love pulls at me desperately
Now, now, now
Still, it feels so heavenly
Pound, pound, pound
So I fall in it hopelessly
How, how, how
And it sends me spinning endlessly
Wow, wow, wow


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