Love<You<God "Love through You, through God"

Am I wrong for saying, that through you I found God?
Laid down my fears and put all trust in him
I needed to trust him
Because for once I felt free
Free to love and feel
And not regret those feelings
I knew then, my heart was changing
I found faith through God, which manifested into my Commitment to You
I now understand what vows are
Not false promises, but lifelong commandments which I live by
It's like God sent you me and gave me sight at the same time
Sight to see the future ahead of time
Ahead of time
I give myself to you, the way you give yourself to me
And I thank God, for he touched you with a Golden Heart
You have shown me what love looks like
What it feels like, smells like, and the sounds...
I'll never forget the sounds of such truth, spread out in the open
I've changed
In heart and mind, yet my spirit remains pure
My spirit, full of Passion
And yours, full of Ambition
You match me with rigid corners and I Love it

Comments

jwiener

This is a lovely poem. I especially enjoyed the line "You have shown me what love looks like / What it feels like, smells like, and the sounds..." because love seems like something you cannot touch or see, but you manage to use your senses to find love in this poem, and you use beautiful words to describe what you believe love to be.

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