The Lost Red, White and Blue

Do my eyes decieve me ?

or is it that we live in a destructive country ?

that's what I'm trying to figure out 

how can our country get better with closed mouths ?

instead of perservering as one 

we all want to solve our issues with guns 

no, that's not the wave to ride 

if we all stick together we will all survive

we all want to see each other fail rather than see each other strive 

can't we just stick together ?

I'm tired of seeing my brothers and sisters die

can't we just stop doing each other wrong ?

and build the country together as the one it needed to be all along 

 

 

 

This poem is about: 
My country
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Comments

sheiane04

I hope ya'll enjoy this poem, these are my feelings towards everyday situations. 

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