"Losing Our Daughters"


United States
29° 59' 7.35" N, 90° 15' 9.4176" W

Imagine a world connected to another by waters
Puddles surrounding the neighborhood, families losing daughters
In the night the creatures roam, kidnapping little girls, making them alter
Once the dark realm ends, the girls wish they had their father
Not another night goes by without the tears of many mothers
Too bad tissues can't wipe away the salty drops from the eyes of brothers
Dark days, bright nights, you can't hear anymore innocent laughter
Every month on the first, one by one they disappear forever after


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