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I thought I can show her the way of love,

Make her feel untouchable like from heaven above,

Be her friend and also her one,

No more thinking her love is done,

Give her that light that she can not see,

A trail to that special place inside me,

Thinking i was close to getting ahead,

I find out she met another dude instead,

Now I'm to late,

To give her what she need,

She found that other,

Where her love might be freed,

I waited forever instead still alone,

My heart she took and left uknown,

Done with her and every other,

Focused on my goals one after another,

No sense chasing or fighting it seems,

Maybe in the future,

Love will come out my dreams.

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