Just another bitter ex-girlfriend


Slurred words

Blurred lines

Raw emotion

And cold rhymes


Hot desire

Left to burn

Helpless love

Still never returned


Betrayal, distrust

Wounds left untreated

Skin left untouched

And heart left defeated


Ends left loose

Issues unaddressed

Sickening voids

That arose in my chest


While the alcohol’s fresh…


I’m glad that you left

The day that I met you

I curse and regret


But when the sun rises

And I get sober…


I damn the day you declared it was over   



I send snaps your way.


That was great. So well-written. Such emotion.

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