For Jason

Sun, 06/01/2014 - 18:06 -- hduane

There's too much pain

and too much sorrow,

too much suffering here.

It's undeserved, all this hurt

I wish there was some solution.


The rain doesn't help at all,

the water can't wash away pain.

The drops only hide our tears,

fools them into thinking we're sane.


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