Jamie

Location

37690
United States
36° 15' 31.1688" N, 82° 33' 3.7692" W

Dang Jamie, your turning six.
watch out,life goes by way too quick.
make sure you get even proportions in the mix.
experience life,not just a click.
take time to read the message in the bottle,
because all seems to get to you after a while.
And it won't be too long til' you get married,
then you'll be walking your girl down the isle.
Don't take things to the extremes,
hand around the mild.
fight for what you believe in,
but just make sure you have a good reason.
When it comes to girls,make sure it's love,
understand there is someone above.
Don't be picky,especially when it comes to grub,
and every now and again we all need a hug.
Don't worry about what's to come,
live out the young
part of your life.
trust there's an explanation to the goodbyes.
When it comes to school,try.
Be careful with your heart,
don't let people fill it with lies.
I see some Smith in your eyes,
just don't let it be your demise.
we all have our highs,
and definitely have our lows.
It just depends on how you take the blows.
Parts of this journey you can't control,
so let life roll,
allow your path to unravel.
get out of Tennessee, travel.
Take a chance to read the bible,
if you dont like it,then your liable.
stay in shape,body and mind,
they will be your best assets the whole time.
spend a moment in Cudi zone,
be your best in nature, not on your phone.
The world will leave your mind blown
but we are here with you, your never alone.
we are siblings, when you need something
we will come running.
I love you brother,never stop growing.

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