I've been awake...

Sat, 04/18/2015 - 09:13 -- masiya

Tonight i shall not sleep knowing that you in the other room.

Tonight i shall not sleep knowing its your last night here at home

As i stand outside your bedroom door, remembering all the great advice

you used to give me.

Always had the right words to say at the right time.

Tonight i shall be staring at the new moon and stars

knowing that you will be right next to me.

i guess its true what they....in death people start to listein 

Because all the things you said to me before you passed on 

are playing over and over in my head

 

I have been awake since you left home

and i'm wondering if sleep will come again...

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