Sat, 01/04/2014 - 23:55 -- c8lyn94

She thought she was invincible

19 and young

Invincible to the cops

Invincible to the shots

Invincible to a drive

That took her down a road late one night

She ran from the cops,

Filled with liquored shots

She took that ride

To heaven

Didn’t even say goodbye

Goodbye to her mother

Or her sister

No more I love you daddy

Don’t worry I will be alright

She thought she was invincible

But only in heaven is that possible

So gone like flash

From the car and a path

Gone from

Our lives

Taken by flight

So goodbye we said

You’re invincible now

So look over us

You’re invincible


That your memory burns

You’re invincible now




Just utterly Beautiful poem it had a good enough of a back story while still not leading the reading to long. just brilliant in every sense of the word

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