indistinguishable

when you teach morality

as indistinguishable 

from god 
 
and you teach god 
as indistinguishable 
from religion
 
and you teach religion 
as indistinguishable 
from church
 
when your church betrays you
is this gods betrayal?
 
when your religion conflicts
with your morality
which do you abandon?

Comments

ahicks4

That was incredible! I've never seen someone put so much emotions behind so little words. Even without my personal connection to this poem, I find this poem awesome. Thanks for sharing

lopocket

That is sweet of you to say! Thank you so much.

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