I'm Finally Home!

Today is the day

I'M FINALLY GOING HOME

FAR, FAR AWAY.

I'm super excited about the fact that I'm going to be

with my brothers and sisters,

And walk on the land of my ancestors.

Day kept going by

until the day finally arrived

I'M GOING HOME!

Boy this is gonna be a long flight.

18 HOURS!

Wow, this is it, I'M FINALLY HOME

I already have a positive feeling about this

Always joyful and never alone.

Wow, look at that beautiful city.

The lights, hills and skies,

How pretty.

Walking in the dirt, the acres and acres of land,

I LOVE IT!

Laughing, playing and running around with the children

I LOVE IT!

How beautiful is the sound of that choir

and the congregation worshipping the Lord with all that is in them.

I couldn't help but join with them.

What a gorgeous sunset

it looks just like a poster.

 So many incredible emotions are going through my mind

as I....Just look at that beautiful "poster".

I see myself in every person,

And they see me in them.

Everyone appreciates my presence,

And I'm very comfortable in their presence.

Every single day I kept saying to myself:

THANK YOU GOD THAT I'M FINALLY HOME!

 

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

well said..........

adezsaloray

Thanks!...I love your work also.

 

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