i wish

i wish you would notice

how my hair is thinner

my stomach is flatter

and my eyes are always red.

 

i wish you would notice 

when I dont sleep

how my face is pale 

and i dont pay attention

 

i wish you would notice 

how i'm changing

how i'm leaving

how i'm dying.

 

i wish you would notice 

i wish you would help

i wish you would care.

This poem is about: 
My family

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