I win

I tried so hard to keep you close
Did everything you wanted
I just wanted someone to hold
Who understood where I started
My pain runs deep
I am a mystery
And you were what I wanted
So when you asked these things of me
I gave you what you wanted

But still you left me behind
For a girl you barely knew
You thought that she'd be perfect
But now you're in my shoes
I know I should feel sorry
For I know the pain it caused
But all I feel is triumph
For you now know your loss

This poem is about: 
Me

Comments

SarahBlum314

I really love this poem! It struck a chord in me I didn't know I had. Great work. :)

nellie621

Thanks :D

nellie621

Thanks :D

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