I understand what it is

Sun, 09/22/2013 - 18:38 -- mimbrie

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I understand what it is I should see

the complexity of our language, the beauty of an

apostrophe

How a smudge on paper changes

the word

the sentence

The idea just passed from author

to editor

to person to person to person

 

But in all this you forget the beauty of me

Because the topic should not be

the passive voice of my

complex

compound

sentence

But rather,

the complexity of what I see

in this world surrounding me

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