i look inside your soul

i look inside your soul with eyes so pale and cold

I'd love to talk to you, wish i could see right through-

all your empty lies, they leave you paralyzed

i don't know what to do or what you're going through 

you locked me out my dear, and you still won't let me near

how did you come undone?

why won't you open up?

I'll help you get through this, clean up your every mess

I'll show you that it's ok, no you have not been shamed

you blink and rise with hope, never to be alone

but your hatered runs too deep 

it boils underneath the surface

surprisingly cold, you drift away

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