I Do Notice

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I do notice.I know what you are going throughBecause in you I see some of me.It's as if He has had it get you too. Except there is a problem.I don't know how to help.I just know that I want to grab my bowAnd use the arrow to make myself yelp. I see your pain.But what can I do?All I want to do is help.I want to see you less blue. I ask if you're alright.It seems like the thing to be done.What am I to say though?When you tell me you cannot run? If I can't figure myself outHow can I ever assist?I really want to help youBut my mind seems to resist. "I have issues." You let out"I just can't find my way."I don't know what to do.How can I erase a bad day? Please know that I do notice.I really want to help you.I just wish I knew how.I pray for the day when I can know you're not blue. 

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