Hurt

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Hurt from all the pain,

i just want to run away,

in a safer place I'll be

put out of my misery,

i point the gun towards me,

and slowly count to three

 

 

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diana_knows_poetry

old one of mine 

savigirl14

It's short and to the point. I've been to the point where I want to do this. Please read my poems and tell me what you think

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