How Dare You

Thu, 10/11/2012 - 13:03 -- Jade

Location

74881
United States
35° 43' 45.6924" N, 97° 4' 16.8852" W

You left me
In the darkness
Alone to be

Without a key
Nothing such as kindness
You left me

I lay on a lumpy
Bed which was hopeless
Alone to be
Kept in misery
Now I felt loveless
You left me

Only seeing the letter D
Next to nothingness
Alone to be
Tortured by the enemy
Surrounded by wetness
You left me
Alone to be

Comments

Jade

This poem was inspired by the movie "Remember Me".

upnorthdavid

This is really, really good stuff! A delight to read!

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