His eyes are like home, A warm place, A fresh breath of air, That let her know he was safe.

His smile is lovely, A sweet sound, A good mood, That let her know he would share happiness.

His attitude is gentleman like, A joyful tear, A greatful heart, That let her know he'd treat her right.

His looks are like a greek adonis, A beautiful sight, A lovely guy, That let her know he had her eye.

His secrets are like a storm, A frightful place, A hurtful pain, That let her know he is broken.

Is he still perfect for her, or to dangerous toward her?


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