Hell's Ecstasy

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A seemingly prolonged drive

Delivers a miraculous surprise

That is hard to find during the scorching heat.

 

Refreshing air engulfs your body.

Every fiber of your being tenses up

As you embrace the change in weather.

 

The everyday hell you live in is forgotten

When the brisk air is absorbed through your pores.

Nothing seems to matter.

 

Not many people are eager to

Drive and take a hike

At the refreshing Mogollon Rim.

 

Those who proceed with the journey to

Thirty degree cooler weather,

Experience nirvana.

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