Heavens Skies

Mon, 04/22/2013 - 09:52 -- TGrillz

I look you right into the eyes and disregard all of the lies.
I swear I'm lookin into heavens skies.
I look you right into the eyes and time starts to fly.
I never bothered to question why.
I always let time whip right by.
I never dreamt a dream so sweet until you and I...
were underneath a star-lit sky,
I turned to my side and looked you in the eyes,
I swore I was looking into heavesn skies.

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

its very meaningful

very emotionally driven

interesting way of connecting words to something symbollic

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