Haiku

Mon, 04/20/2020 - 07:12 -- Uol

Someone suffering
Alone vehement efforts
Menacing end

This poem is about: 
Me
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Comments

Annette M Velasquez

Intense, emotional and impactful... You've adhered to the syllable count of a haiku- perfectly. Most, if not all haiku deal with an element of nature- the seasons etc. If a poem is written in the same form, but about something other than nature, it is a senyru. Still, this is a remarkable senyru.

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