~Guilty Crown~

Sat, 10/08/2016 - 11:07 -- lalaxxz

It is very dark inside

Sadness came and covered my eyes

She covers my teary eyes, and muted my ugly cries

Whenever I tried to fight back, she told be "Hush, dear"

Wandering in the forest 

A broken antler deer

She raises her bow and arrow, ready to shoot

But I can't even move one inch of my foot

"Bang bang bang" she stared at me with a frown

And now I'm wearing my golden guilty crown.

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