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This is me world so let me in don't try and lock me out I want in! I deserve to be in! That's why I buy the finest of the finest polo, coach, MK, and Juicy Couture.... if I have those things I should be able to fit in right?... Will society accept me then? No ?okay so let me cut my hair or better yet let me get that 1,000 dollar weave I saw then pay an extra 75 to get it put awe man world am i worthy of such honor now ? I just want to be accepted in this life everything does not always flow how you want it to because truth is I don't have that kind of money to have the finest of the finest I was not fortunate enough therefore it is okay that I'm not accepted by society if that's what it takes I'll stand alone and be different there is more to life than materialistic and flashy things because at the end you will leave it all when you die.

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