The Girl I Once Loved

I want to get lost in your mind

Where no one will ever find me

A safe haven, from people and time

A place, where I am meant to be.

 

Show me what you feel inside

Not all at once, just a short story.

Follow your heart; let it be your guide.

Just tell it, no matter how poorly.

 

Tell me about all of your loves

As I stare deeply into your eyes,

Seeing all the heavens, stars, above,

And your lips, wanting them against mine.

 

Because once you show the real you,

You will find her I know you will.

It will be worth it, which is true.

The girl I once loved, and do still.

 

Comments

Getalifetwat

I wanted to read what someone else felt. You put a smile on my face. I can tell you love her. Cute. Loving actually.

Monster84

Thanks, you actually made my morning.

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