Freedom in responsibility

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Pakistan

Galatians 5:1 Christian Liberty5 Stand fast therefore in the liberty by which Christ has made us free,and do not be entangled again with a yoke of bondage. Freedom in Responsibility

 

You want to be free to do what you see.

You want no restrictions to bind you.

I know you to be free for what you ought to be

but it is just yourself … who guides you.

 

Desires and wishes … self-centered in kisses

on your own hand in the center of your will.

You’re so energetic … almost magnetic

as you mark everything … on God’s bill.

 

There is no change as in value you arrange

every item into your own conception.

Interpreted by self … then stacked in a shelf

as the ends justified the means in perception.

 

The choices you make … as in habit you take

all the things you think you deserve.

Makes you wonder why … others don’t try

to understand your freedom and nerve.

 

Jan Wienen

 

This poem is about: 
Me
My community

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