freE.

Tue, 05/06/2014 - 17:09 -- JVKE

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i am free to do as i wisH. no rules need apply to thY.

                                    nor thoU.

human consciousness is a burden machine compatible with the soul

so the punishment is there

it's always therE. If punishment is truly absent then I believe the soul is without consciousnesS.

so feed me my dear voice inside my thoughts i feel all day and night and follow for I am blind withouT.

i live by the direction that i am directed in. 

so is everybody elsE. figure it ouT.

 

 

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