Five Senses....

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I watch you from a distance, but you don't know it.....

I see you; tall, handsome, with that smile.

A smile so bright, it can make a blind woman see again, see what she has been missing for the past 22 years of her life.

The way you walk and move as if you're on a mission, but you don't need to conquer anything because your grace alone would make me bow down to you as if you were my king…

I hear you; I love to listen to the words flow out of your mouth into my heart as my blood lingers for you to say more

I feel your presence wrapped around me like a blanket, protecting me from anything and anyone that you see as a threat.

When we’re together, there is no other place I would rather be than in your arms; Arms strong to block those who want to see our love suffer but gentle enough to lift me up when I am down.

I taste the richness of your scent as I rest my head on your chest as we lay “two”-gether as one. A taste so unique, it only comes once a lifetime like the first time we met.

As I gaze into your brown eyes, let me touch your soul with mine. Let me give you what those other women could not give you even if you asked.

Let me give you my innocence. Take your hands into mine and enjoy what no other man dreams about when meeting his love for the first time.

They say you only write once to express the way how you feel, but I need to use my five senses to make you feel what I always wanted to say…………..

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