Feelings

Mon, 10/07/2013 - 15:43 -- Jmagic

I am walking on sun shine 

as I walk towards another day

 I love how the sun shines on my face 

how the wind brushes on my skin

the smell of fresh air run though my nose

I love the smell of water I love the sound of rain

But I can't stop to think ,why?

why am I here, why are we here

I'm so confuesd living on this earth

I would want to die here right now

 just to see what happens when I am done dreaming

wil my soul fly to another universe

and live on another world, I hope so!

But untill then I am going to stay ,

Stay on this earth for as long as I can

I like it here on this earth I call "home"

I like all these feelings they feel

strangely good, so I am going to stay

here for as long as I could and 

 try to find the answer ,why?

Why are we here?

Comments

Jmagic

My favorite part of this poem was not noticing I spelled *will* wrong. 12 line 1st word.

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