United States
43° 1' 1.866" N, 78° 57' 45.9432" W

his brain leakeS

Then could barely seek

Although his child spoke

Nothing but a cry for his life

father Don’t leave

Unless you’re forgetting me

his voiced carried Perfervid

‘just Forget it i’m done’

his brain is Officially gone

Regardlessly he sees

his child’s love Yelling for him

 he softly speaks

  ‘Goodbye my Only one’

 that’s it a father’s love forever gone

Until walking away

Is the only way

To live

A promise to keep

Even when it kills




This poem is about: 
My family


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