Family

When I hear the word, “ Family.”

I have the image in of a group of people.

People, who love each other no matter what happen.

There was no onebetter than family.

No matter what happen, we make mistake.

No one perfect, and family alway there to give chance to change.

It never too late to come.

Family need you and you need family.

All together, will have perfect family.

No more of need there a happy family.

Have you ever hear a song Coming Home by Skylar Grey

Just think about this song. Ask our self, “ Why she say I coming home?”

Because the word family in the home.

Make that house into Home sweet home.

Her Family alway wait for us no matter

what because our family still love us who we are.

No one better than your family.

If this home don’t have my family.

What is the point of coming home.

Family and home are the two word

That build up happiness, loveful, and helpful.

 

Comments

superheadlock

Practice your english more.  Your ideas are very good, but they are hidden by broken english. Sometimes I don't know what you mean, or I don't get all of the meaning.  

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