Falling For You

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I remember that it hurt,
The day I met you.
I was unable to breath,
Feeling as if my lungs were seized,
Silence around, becoming deaf,
Only to hear your voice.
I remember the pain in my chest,
From my heart skipping a beat.
I remember, that falling for you,
Hurt.

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Delovely16

Good writing! That was spot-on!

jcsmalls82

Thanks Delovely16, I am glad you liked it.

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