Everything is going to be amazing - Poem about a new year by Partiv

 

 

Sup yall, ya know me in the hood tonight

 

Imma show yall why it's gonna be a great year for us all

 

So to the biggity to the bop here we go

                                                                                                                                                                                                                  

2019, the year of the pig the year to fix all of my mistakes

 

The year where I change all my bad perks and correct my errors

 

Slow dancing in the night, working hard during the day and playing football every day

 

Eating good mac n cheese  as he climbs into my stomach

 

And gets me ready for the day

 

And at night I’ll  watch Tyrone Mohamed Tuklashanmoor videos

 

I’m going to forget all of my bad habits and start learning more mathematics

 

Improve the errors remove the terrors and put in more effort

 

I’m sorry for my mistakes and promise to showcase the best version of myself possible.

 

I will be as brave as a lion, as busy as a bee, as calm as a millpond

 

Because….

 

This year is mine, and just like a firework, ’m going to make an impact, boom boom!

   TECHNIQUES USEDRhymingOnomatopoeiaPersonificationSimile           

This poem is about: 
Me

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Also uses free verse poetry

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