entitlement mentality-the sequel

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United States
40° 51' 43.8444" N, 73° 53' 9.636" W
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entitlement mentality ................
strips your drive
strips your ambitions
strips your motivation
strips your aspiration
strips your desire
strips your freedom
strips your success
strips your abundance
strips your hunger to be the best
instead of taking all these components off like strippers who dance around poles with no class
its time to put those components back on better than a dude that gets no ass

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jwiener

12 years ago

The repetitive use of "strips" is another example of how one word can have have multiple meanings. Here, you use this word in several instances, each making a very powerful statement to enhance your overall message.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

12 years ago

thanks 4 the support
its about creatively enhancing the english language whether the concepts is intellectual, practical, poltical,etc
most important thing is how to use the words we choose
check out my other poems

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