End of a frendship

End of a friendship

 

What is a friend

If you're like me unfortunately

You probably think it’s someone who will be with you

until the end

Well that would be a true friend

but

As you will see

it isn't that easy

Especially for me

In the end they're all like shadows

their to help you in your brightest hour

But no were to be found in your darkest days.

It started with hello

I should have just said no

But it's me

And i am always too friendly

 we know how it's started

But how does it end

In rage

Or

Pain

Well neither in the end

All that's left is a empty place nothing

It's a little saddening

And frankly a little madding

But what choice do i have in the end

So in the end there's nothing left

Except a touch of pain with nothing to gain

 

This poem is about: 
Me

Comments

Sa339593

I love your poem. The pain is tangible here. 

Recommendation: I got the 'Grammarly' app and it helps me a lot while I write poetry, I mean sometimes the words flow too fast even for my good hands. jk- still learning to type : )

Greta job though!

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