Elapsed

Thu, 05/16/2013 - 21:16 -- rosey35

Location

53582
United States
43° 0' 0.1836" N, 89° 58' 52.842" W

Charlotte's red and gusty breeze
Wiping down the laney square.
Thrashing greens and yellows
bare.
Waiting, watching, calls me there.

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