Easy Noumenon (II)

Location

New Milford, Connecticut
United States

When looking
Not seeing
When touching
Not feeling


These are the conditions


Yet the touch
And the sight


Fill the void
Of their own accord


The eye sees itself
When the empty hand
Is forced


As they close, retract
Both dissolve


Numb and done
A smile, nonetheless

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