Dusk's Domain

It's not the place of in-between,

Nor the place where souls scream

Night is, as night does

Not in this world, or the one above

For if you stay, you just might find

By dawn's break, you've lost your mind

There is no sun, no stars, no shine

In this desert wasteland, now mine

It's not the place where beasts fear to tread

But the land where men's feet turn to lead

 

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bryciecngls

This is one of the first poem's I've ever written, so I hope you like it.

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