Dream

Fri, 05/03/2013 - 09:36 -- FatimaJ

Location

38115
United States
35° 2' 59.0964" N, 89° 51' 35.5032" W

I have a dream in mind that I want to achieve.
I know the direction in which I need to go.
But how can I reach that dream if I don’t believe.
Its like my mind is covered in white snow.
That dream is right before my eyes.
But it feels if though I am almost blind.
By the darkness that lies high in the skies.

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

you can be anything you want to be in life
you have to work for it
build off this idea and expand your thoughts
believe in yourself

FatimaJ

Thanks alot!

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