do you hear me

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96929
Guam

Do you hear
me cry at
night i am
unhappy

Told you many
times that i
want to die

Yet you won't
listen to me
an put more
on me

And every inch
makes me worst
you only care
about yourself

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savigirl14

This poem is great. The words are so simple yet they tell a true emotion contained within your situation. Please read my poems and tell me what you think

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