divided states of america (united we will stand)

i'm from the united states of america

i live in the divided states of america

where we are under one nation of God

but yet, people don't know him

when folks get exasperated, they yell god dammit

how can God be damn if He didn't commit any sin to you

when any person get execrated, they shout jesus christ in vein

world that continues to incite separation

in raising body temperatures so high, people suffer hypertension

full of hate

hearts harden that is full of evil thoughts

distortion that pierces weaken souls to suppress love that conquers fear

i'm no fan of either trump nor hilary

a source is reported that russian president vladimir putin allegedly is involve

in the email scandals during the 2016 election 

where he held a grudge with disgruntle feelings that's irrelevant

now if that's true

president elect will be impeach

prison of war erupts so viciously

the news won't have a sports section due to ongoing of killings reported

corny as it may sound, cheaters never prosper

John 8:12 states "I am the light of the world, whoever follows me will never walk in darkness,

but will have the light of life"

when you commit sin, you are a slave of sin

Galatians 5:19 reminds me on the acts of flesh that include:

sexual immorality, impurity, debauchery, idolatry, witchcraft, hatred, discord, jealousy

fits of rage, selfish ambitions, dissensions, faction, envy, drunkeness

i know that in the end while people are still fighting

The Lord is preparing me a place to live where i'm no longer a visitor.


This poem is about: 
Our world
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I love how this shows the state of America from a non biased side, 

great poem!

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This poem is about facilitating change and recognizing the atrocities we been dealt with
I hope a poem like this creates uncomfortability where we need to pray for the better


I love this poem! I love how it's about God and how corrupt the government is. I'm glad someone had the same feelings about the government as I do. Instead it f relying on them, people should reside on the lord. 

The part I loved most of the poem was when you said that the lord is preparing you for a better place. It gives the reader a sense of hope after reading about war and government issues. It gives the reader a feeling that theres more yet to come and it's going to be better. 

Keep writing ! I love it ! 

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this is a poem focusing on The Lord's purpose of why He was sent

we're fighting a war outside, we as human beings need to do right by The Lord by loving people, and showing the way of shepherding them to Jesus

the last reflects the truth where Jesus is coming, and preparing a wonderful place , away from intoxicated environments

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