Discovery

In the end
once the false veil lifts
reality takes place
of the innocent perspective of young
children, unrealistic dreams, dedication.

The real world
difficult, simply difficult
the obstacles, they stand, stoic
guarding  the treasure which is satisfaction, happiness

The values of life, the working universe.

 

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