The Deepest Pain

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36618
United States
30° 44' 1.5324" N, 88° 10' 40.5048" W

My chest still hurts from you stabbing me in my back.
My neck still hurts from when you slit my throat with your lies
My back still hurt from you slamming me into walls while i looked for a way out
But deepest pain was the secret you are made to keep to protect someone you hate
My feelings are still hurt from you picking him over me
My legs still hurt from running from my fears that you caused once again
My head still hurts from shedding so many tears for you
My ears still hurts from you yelling at me
But da deepest pain was wen you lied to me
You said you would protect me but instead its your fault it happened
You protected him instead of me i trusted you i believed in you but you left me there waiting for you
My savior who would never come
I was bleeding my scars were still open and you left me there to die
You saw my tortured soul and you looked the other way
You knew he would rape me and you didn't tell me until now
When we are about to graduate
You keep this secret all this time to protect someone you swore you hated
But me, your "bff", you let him rape me while you stood there and looked the other way
You ignored my screams for help
Said nothing as he repeatedly cracked my ribs broke my bones
I cant believed you stood there while i was dying and never muttered a word or offered your help
And when it was all over you left with him and abandoned me
Then the next day try to apologize like nothing happened
What kinda friend are you? how could you?
If you are the example of a friend i dont want friends.

Comments

RebeccaYSPerez

I really loved the repetitveness of this poem and it made it seem so haunting and heartbreakingly scary. Though I know everyone is allowed their own creative outlook when they write, I think it would be best to revise your poem and omit all "text talk" and properly write them out.

Becca.

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