Darkness

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Once upon a gloomy night, everything was dark and the moon was bright.

Everyone in the world came say, "Oh my Lord! Where is the Day?"

The Day is gone and night is here.

The Darkness is our eternal fear!

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TheLyricBard

10 years ago

Short and simple, but definitely filled with intensity and power.

Keep it up!<<3

Oh, and by the way, I believe that the second IS in the line "where is the IS Day?" is a typo.

 

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