Dandelion

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91773
United States
34° 6' 3.582" N, 117° 49' 9.912" W
91773
United States
34° 6' 3.582" N, 117° 49' 9.912" W

Bending, swaying, taunting me,

Begging, pleading, wanting freed,

white wish-holders dance aloft,

dream-cry whispers downy, soft,

flying, twirling, sailing high,

magic captured, drinking sky,

tripping, falling, screaming, die,

 

Which ones hold them,

my burdened prayers?

the ones flown to heaven,

or trapped down here?

 

Wish I will on every one,

until the wish I pray has come,

Its not the weed that makes believe,

that Someone's heard my desperate plea,

the lift from my heart to see them fly,

keeps me dreaming, praying, alive

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