Dancing in the Rain

Heads are turning on an axis

As they’re dancing lightning flashes

Round and round their spirits go,

Rain drops falling on their noses.

 

Wishing it would never end

Thunder crashing out again,

Coming close then going far

Eyes turned upward toward the stars.

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