Corey

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A beautiful woman with certain grace,

I have observed her many occasions.

A woman with a pretty face,

Who writes about personified nations.

 

Many days I was patient as I had lay in wait,

For such a talented woman to send me a reply.

I had often feared this wasn't fate,

Was this hello some how a good bye..?

 

With time, I had found she had replied,

The best of friends we were.

It wasn't until a few weeks later I had found myself entwined,

And had fallen completely for her.

 

When I had finally asked her out, all in a short line,

It was that single moment where I had finally made her mine.

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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerfully expressed

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